Written for my myspace layout at the time, based off this picture. http://i148. photobucket. com/albums/s38/littlema77/images/de1e7908. jpg.
Second stanza bothers me, but every time I try to fix it, it just gets worse. Constructive criticsm welcomed. It doesn't flow, but I can't figure out what to do with it.

Tempt me into falling,
Lure me to your web.
Falling is like flying,
Until you reach the end.
Make it last forever,
please me for the fall,
And when the rude awakening comes,
I'll not complain at all.

All flights must come to an ending,
even Angel's wings tire,
So whether falling or flying,
an end must ccome to all.

Some landings are with grace,
some come with sudden shock,
But all landings are an ending,
to an endless flight of bliss.

So tempt me into falling,
lure me with a caress,
Falling is like flying,
both must reach an end.

Whether the ending is a peaceful one,
or a sudden painful jolt--
A graceful lighting upon the ground
or a pain filled crash and burn--
If you Tempt me softly,
caress me with your words,
the ending comes with pleasure,
A blissful end for all.