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Author: Azure Rose
Fiction Rated: K - English - Drama - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10-18-07 - Updated: 10-18-07 - Complete - id:2427727

A/N: I wrote this story in english with my friends. Hope you like it!


It has been five months since my parents divorced. I live with my mum, I don’t see my dad. My parents are fighting over the custody of me. (I wish they would just listen to me!) Let me tell you about my mum. My mum has fair brown hair, shiny blue eyes and a winning smile.

My dad on the other hand, has black hair but a streak of grey in between .He has hazel eyes just like me! I love my dad so much; I wish I could split my self in to two, so I could be with my mum and dad at the same time.

On Thursday my dad had come to visit me! But my mum slammed the door in his face!! I hate my mum! Arrrhg!

A few weeks later…

My mum and dad finally have decided that I could visit my dad every other weekend! Also once a week on Wednesdays. I am so glad my mum and dad are not still fighting over me.

This is my second weekend at my dad’s. I have my own room as well, with rosy pink walls. In the living room, there are leather sofas with crimson red cushions.

My dad said there was a surprise for me this weekend. DING-DONG I then opened the door. I was horrified of what I saw before me she was a short chubby woman. Stood with the fakest smile I’ve ever seen. She had a fragrance that smelt like a wet dog. (Well to me any way.) She came in, my heart was pounding. At that point I have never felt so alone…

TWO MONTHS LATER

I HATE, I HATE, AND I HATE MY STUPID DAD AND HIS UGLY HAG OF AN IDIOT GIRLFRIEND OF HIS!! Only two months into their relationship and their already married!

What kind of twisted logic is that?! Has my dad’s brain melted? No, stop laughing! I'm serious! That girlfriend of his is controlling him. But she won’t control ME. EVER! You can slap some sense into me if she does manage it somehow though.

Who does she think she is?! She is trying to control my life like my mum would. Which SHE will NEVER be! That’s it! That’s what she is trying to do. She wants to be my mum. I can’t believe her sly devious plan! She is trying to squeeze me out of my dad’s life and take my place. That is SO cruel!

I have to talk to my dad. I haven’t got any other choice. She hasn't LEFT me a choice! Things have gotten way out of hand. No matter how much I hate it I have to tell him how I feel…

WOOOOHOOOOO!!

I talked to my dad and he talked to his girlfriend. She decided that there’s not room for both of us. She told my dad to choose…..

You'll never guess what, he chose me! His girlfriend walked out and he promised me that I always will be his number one girl. And no one (here he repeated himself), will get in the way of that!

By Leia, Navdeep, Myra and Vietanh.

A/N: Like it or hate it? Please review!



© Copyright 2007 Azure Rose (FictionPress ID:576104).


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