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Author: RedYugi
Fiction Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Reviews: 2 - Published: 10-24-07 - Updated: 10-24-07 - id:2430209

-1My Little Story Thingy

THUD! a vampire hit the ground. THUD! A spinning kick sent another one down. I looked around. There were still many more vampires but they were more cautious then the others. I started to reflect on why this was happening, why I wasn't at home, lying in my own bed, in my own house, with my own family still alive in my own world. It all started when my bestest friend Jake and secret crush, came over to tell me some thing really important.

CH.1

"So what did you want to talk about that’s so important?" Jake shifted a little uneasily. "Priscilla, I've a confession to make." This got me excited. He would tell me about his secret crush on me and we'd live happily ever after. I'd dreamed about this for a long time...and now it was finally coming true! "I am not from this world." ...That floored me.
"What?!" He better tell me this is a nervous joke or I'm going to be pissed!
Jake looked at me uneasy. "I know it is hard to believe, but I really am not from this world." Now I maybe into vampires and stuff, but really, a different world? Not something I believe in.
"Well...why are you telling me this?" He stared at me and his hazel eyes drew me in. They complemented his perfect nose and his white, pearl-like, teeth and...Snap out of it! I thought to myself.
"Well you are my best friend and I care about you. My dad says you have a magical aura around you and that means that you will be attacked by other magical creatures and/or otherworldly creatures."
I blinked. "Say what?" Jake repeated himself. I was stunned to say the least. My best friend, the love of my life, was a nut job. Great. "Well then Jake, I guess you should be leaving now." I said, pushing him towards the door. He hadn't come here to say the three little words expected, so why should I listen to his crock? Answer: Because it may be important. My Reply: I don't care!
"Priscilla, you have got to listen to me. You are in danger."
I was pissed now, I can take on guys twice my size. How dare he even think me weak. "Look, Jake, if you still want to be my friend anymore, I suggest you go home and stop with all this nonsense." I pushed him out and slammed the door before he could say anything. A minute later saw him walking down the street. I sighed. Boy, did I screw up.


Ok look. This is a guy writing this. I have a friend who is a girl who betas for me. But she is a tomboy so if it seems wrong, then it is not my fault. XD

Anyway, I can’t decide if Jake is going to like Priscilla (who’s name was Abby but my friend wanted me to change it and I am a gentlemen when she asks me something though I hate it and I do it.) more then a friend so you guys tell me and I’ll see



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