|Super Pretty Magical Girl Shoujo Manga Mako!
Author: Project-Asylum108 PM
This is a parody of ALL shoujo manga that is practically the same, as the name implies it will be about a Magical Girl named Mako. Please, enjoy and review!Rated: Fiction K+ - English - Humor/Parody - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,933 - Reviews: 15 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 11-01-07 - Published: 10-31-07 - id: 2433051
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AN: Thank you for choosing this story to read or just glance at, but if you've clicked on the title, please at give the first chapter at least a try and review it to tell me why or why not you will or won't continue with reading it. Reviews are a great way to let an author know what you are thinking about it, but in all, I ask if you please do not flame, as they are only used for roasting chickens anyway .
Warning: EVERYTHING, this story uses elements from almost every Shoujo manga and anime that I know of (Sailor Moon, Fushigi Yugi, Revolutionary Girl Utena etc...) if you do not like parodies, please just at least give this chapter a try, you might like it? This will have light cursing in future, boys who look like girls, girls who are stronger than boys, and enemies who come to bother the main character EVERY chapter.
Chapter one: The door
Mako was your average grade-making schoolgirl, but of course, prettier. Her hair was very long, down to her ankles and a mesh between blond and brown. Her big eyes were sparkling blue and her face was so pretty that she did not have to wear make-up. Her school uniform was a typical Japanese high school uniform but since she was so good at sewing, she gave her uniform a golden trim.
Right now, Mako sat in her classroom, bored out of her mind since right now her class period was history and what more of a boring subject other than math. Instead, she starred out of the window for a good long while, so long in fact that she fell asleep in the middle of her lesson. How embarrassing! But not for Mako, she was so pretty even while she slept that her teacher did not even care that she slept in class, nor did anyone else in the class, in fact, many of the boys all took pictures of her while she silently dreamed of a peaceful flower filled hill side.
The bell for school tolled and she jumped up. How long was she sleeping? She could not remember exactly when she fell asleep but as it seemed, no one cared about it, so neither did she. She picked up her bag and started on her way home.
The school was not that big, but it was big enough that they had a gazillion clubs in it and all sorts of sports. Mako was not on the sports team, but the boy she liked was the captain of the tennis team. He was a very handsome boy, shimmering green eyes and short auburn hair, his body was lightly framed but he was very strong. He was feminine, to an extent. She often daydreamed about him, but never really told anyone.
When she finally reached her home, a small three bedroom, one and a half bath house, her parents were happily married for all her fifteen years and probably even before then. Her mother worked as a teacher in a different school and her father worked for a business company so he was usually late coming home.
She opened the door to her room and plopped down on her bed, laying there for a moment before sitting up and then standing up, taking off her shirt and skirt to change into something else. She opened her closet door and was overwhelmed by an intense light that suddenly engulfed her.
Yes, I know it's short, but the first chapter is normally short, ne? Anyway, please R&R! I have a LOT of ideas for this story, so the more reviews received, the better the chapters will be and perhaps the longer they will be as well.