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Author: Tears of Trees
Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11-04-07 - Updated: 11-04-07 - Complete - id:2434315

I plopped down on the couch next to my brother. My dad had the TV on a golf channel ad there was noway we would be allowed to change it, despite the fact that he was sleeping. So I sat there next to my brother and watched the people hit little balls that are nearly impossible to see as they go flying up into the sky. A commercial break comes on and the first two are about cars. Did you know that most of the commercial are for cars? So the next commercial comes on.

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A girl is walking slowly across a black background. She starts to speak all eerie like. “When I was four my parents where killed.” I heard a gun shot. The girl continues to speak, “At ten, my sister was murdered.” Then came this ear splitting scream. I figured I just heard the sister’s last sound. “I was all alone. I had no living relations. Even if I did. . . How would they of found me?”

Then the girl and the background fade out to show a world map with forty or so red dots all over it. There is a reporter pointing at the screen. “This girl has had more than forty different identities since she was four!” His voice is all reporter like.

Then the girl comes back on, “My way of living?” Then the picture fades out then comes back in with another image of the girl from a different angle. “Be like a ghost,” Then the picture changes to show a close up of half of the girl’s face. “The world should never know. . .” her image starts to fade out ever so slowly. Her voice is becoming all distant and scary, “if you where really there. . .”

Then the picture changes to show a man and woman sitting in a kitchen. The girl is behind the woman up against the wall. The girl raises her gun and points it at the man and then pulls the trigger. The man cripples over clutching his chest, his face full of agony. The woman turns around and sees the girl and lets out a blood curdling scream. Then the girl is gone. The woman is breathing heavily. Not knowing if she really saw the girl or not.

The image fades out and the woman’s breathing can still be heard. The title fades onto the screen, Gunner Death.

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The preview ends and I look over at my brother who is looking over at me. “Awesome!” we say at the same time. We need to go see that movie.

Okay so this is like what I think a cool preview for a movie would be. I needed to stick the girl in there to make it more of a story. The movie and the preview, as far as I know, are completely made ? Yes. But oh well.



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