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Something I wrote... wow, a lot earlier this year. May not be the best. Also, the words in italics are supposed to be over to the right, but fictionpress won't let me keep the tabs I put in place to get them in the right place. T.T I'm no good with html, if that would even help.
Little note; the italisized words are the thoughts/words of a girl. The other words are the enticings of a group entity, many voices talking as one, eerily monotonous yet alluring. I'm not sure if 'they' are a seperate being(s), or if it's just all in her mind...
Better
Come on, you know us
we only set you free
Please let me be.
We give you pleasure, yes dear,
You invited us in
I won’t let you win!
But we’ve already won, isn’t it clear?
You’ve lost the battle and the war.
I can’t take this anymore!
Nobody wants you, but we do
Let us help you
Why must I lose?
But you don’t, you belong to us
Quit making a fuss and succumb
I’m only one…
Isn’t this better than what’s out there?
Then you’re all alone; but now you’re all
Better.
3-14-07