Author's Note: So I'm taking this songwriting class, and one of the things I really need to work on is rhyme scheme, because a song just isn't catchy if it doesn't rhyme. This popped into my head. I think it's different from what I normally do because it has a bit of a rhythm, but I dunno. What do you guys think? I seriously need some reviewing and criticism because I might bring this into my class if it's any good. It's not done yet - the first stanza is a verse, and the second stanza is a chorus of sorts.

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Sweetie, you’re the only one who can
paralyze me, hypnotize me
and otherwise emphasize the
silent sighs when our eyes meet,
and I’m hopin’ that you’re open
to copin’ with the words I’m tryin’ so hard to say.

And maybe it won’t be today,
but I swear I’ll say that I want you to stay,
and maybe, my baby,
if you were to be the one that saves me,
this feeling that I’m missing something
will finally go away.