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Author: Essie Bessie
Fiction Rated: K - English - Mystery/Suspense - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11-18-07 - Updated: 11-18-07 - id:2439931

"I looked at her, stared at her really. What was her problem? I hate it when people do that! I wished she would leave me alone, forever! ' I have to leave' I looked down, a little girl was standing there

"There Naari I told you it all, all I can remember from that day, all of it, after that moment all I see is blank. Can you help me?

"Rest! I don't need rest! I need to remember! Help me, help me please…

"I was driving, a little girl in the back seat, she was chattering a mile a minute, all I wanted was her to shut up. How had I gotten in a car? Whose car was it? The little girl looked at me and smiled…

"After that I lost it, oh can't you do anything? Hypnosis maybe? Please? No? I get it's dangerous, but I need it. Please Naari, please… wait…

"I was alone, in a parking lo, in a strange car. I was staring strait ahead, I couldn't control my body, it was rigid, I was tired, I saw the clock 12:00 a.m., yet there was light outside. I fainted.

"After that you know Narri, I was found in a field, after dark, dead yet alive… I'm tired Narri, let me sleep."

O.k. look- I know it's short, but plz plz plz review. I have a story on under the same name plz plz plz read& review



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