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Author: Ranoko
Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11-19-07 - Updated: 11-19-07 - Complete - id:2440624

Icy

Coldness

Envelops me

creeping up with icy tendrils

reaching peaks along the way

Slowly

Ever slowly

enwrapping my senses

lovingly clinging to

all that they touch

Numbing

Loosing feeling

yet being more aware

than ever I was before

11-15-07


I feel like the end is missing... something; not exactly sure what, but perhaps something... I'm just too impatient to wait more. I keep forgetting about it anyways. :P

Please review if you have the time!

Ja



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