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A/N: This poem was written by my creative writing class using “poetry machine.” This is a folder with a slot cut in it so that each student can only see the line of poetry before theirs. Each student contributes one line. Thus, it is not connected, but more like a rambling thought pattern. Please r&r—many of my classmates have never posted writing online before, so they would appreciate each and every review. Bonus points if you can guess which line is mine! ; )
Creative
Writing Class Poem #2
November
15, 2007
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’Tis the winter of our discontent
When we are so lonely
I miss him, my guy, Matt
But he misses her, that girl, Pat
She was his pretty lass
She never knew how he loved her.
He tried so hard to show it
He didn’t want to blow it
He wanted to lick it
Oh how he loved the taste of the juice
How the sweetness flowed through him
Making him yearn for more
I restrain from speaking
Because the words wouldn’t come out right.
And my lips are numb with the snow