Ta-Da! Here's the first part of my story!!

Mona was a cute little baby. She was born at 10:43 PM on October 31, 1983 as Raven Summers. Her mother, Isobel Summers, couldn't keep her daughter though. Certain medical factors prevented this. Son on December 12, 1983, Isobel took her Raven, in a small baby carrier and left her in front of the First National Bank in Galva, Ohio.

The next day, the baby was brought to the Galva PD. “Where did you find her?” Deputy Romano asked.

“In front of the bank,” Stephanie McConnel answered. “What are you going to do with her?”

“Well, we'll have her placed in a children's home, temporarily. Then after a while, if no one claims her, she may be up for adoption.”

This did happen, and the child was fostered by many parents. Until she was 3, she was called Amanda Thomas. They tried to get her to become a little lady, acting perfectly all the time. But she had a mind of her own. She was such a pain in the butt for Geena and Jeff, that when Geena became pregnant with her own child, “Amanda” was sent back.

All day long, the girl would either color on the walls with red crayon, or sit on her bed, legs crossed, rocking side to side. When doing neither of these, she would moan and complain about everything. everyone called her the “moaning child”. After a while, it shortened to “Mona” The next woman to adopt her, accepted her for exactly who she was. Mona liked this woman and she stayed there for six years. But unfortunately, the woman was busted for selling drugs, and Mona was taken away.

At this 9 years, she was able to handle more responsibility than most people can at 30 years old. And using this judgment and smart responsibility, Mona decided to run away. Before she or anyone else knew it, she was on a bus to California. Everyone from Galva was looking for her, but no one suspected that she had the capability to travel almost the whole way across the country.

Mona ended up in Kennedy, a small town 70 miles north of Los Angeles. Mona had no idea what she was going to do or where she was going to live. She was only nine years old for crying out loud! So she decided to find someone who could help her. ‘But that can wait until tomorrow,' she told herself.

so what do you think? please review and wait for the next part, probably out before the weekend!!