
Just another attempt at haiku's from my creative enrichment course. :p Review please!
Rated: Fiction K - English - Poetry - Words: 76 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 12-07-07 - Status: Complete - id: 2447734
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Christmas Day
Like warm chocolate,
Waking up on Christmas day,
Anticipation.
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Presents hiding just
Out of sight, under the tree,
Daring mystery.
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And sweet smells of the
Pudding my mum used to make,
Like sunshine in snow.
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And then the snowman
That we rebuilt every year,
Frozen and chilled hands.
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At night, the stories
Of past Christmases we shared,
An ever-closer bond.
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And a dream of sharp
Snowflakes melting and leaving,
To return next year.
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