Fantasy Violence: The Unknown Xaara

This is a fantasy story like no other. See the views of many characters as they explain their violent, romantic, tragic experiences. See how it all begins. From what starts as a vacation turns into getting sucked into the problems of the Cha family. And when that seems to subside, what will happen next? Experience the turning point of a young prince's life. This is the first story on here, so go easy.

The Introduction:

You may think as you look at the stars, that your planet is the only one with life out there. But if you were so bold to say that yours is the best, then I urge you to reconsider. Look at that night sky closely and see there are others.

Yes, there are other people out there. They look as you look, walk as you walk and have feelings like you do. They may even be among you and you haven’t noticed. Some do look quite odd for humans but there is nothing a hat or sunglasses can’t cover.

These other species also have bettered technology with more knowledge about the history of the universe. One great device is responsible for hiding the other 8 planets of our sun from human probes and has been fooling them for many years now. Those planets have artificial atmospheres built so they could flee from planets from distant galaxies suffering destruction.

The other planets have an advantage over your planet, an advantage they alone share, but there is an advantage they all share from Earth.

Magic.

Magic is the very ingredient for the technology and plays a very important role in everyday life. There’s light and dark magic powering their very bodies. Whether it is the control of nature or being the difference of someone’s right to keep their soul, that is the range of the types they are.

Pluto is the planet of ice, snow, and smoke powers with people who could survive the harsh temperatures.

Neptune is the home of the best technology and the controlling of water.

Uranus is the home of the darkest magic, and the haunting ghosts, some demons and the hunters who hunt them down. Those who dare to set foot on the dreadful body of orbiting land would have to be insane to cross the line between light and dark Uranus.

Uranus is the darkest and most dangerous and yet the misunderstood planet.

Saturn is the place to find yourself the best wizards of magic. Not only that, but the only bloodline of the Dynlarter magic. That is the ability to change the shape of your body, which is so hard to morph, it ranks as the hardest neutral magic to master. The family with that power also rule over all 8 planets with organization known as SUN (Solar United knights, dumb name but it works).

Saturn may be the controller but Jupiter is the one that is the mighty planet. Having a balanced advantage over almost all the other planets as well as an advantage of their very own. The average person from Jupiter has the strength of Hercules.

Venus is the only planet that hasn’t gotten over the style of medieval times. They are more educated but have put a modern taste to the way they live and they aren’t planing on changing soon.

Mars is the richest planet with two kings who rival over the other. The fowl clan is the strongest bloodline of all the other planets with the power to use soul reaping magic. While the Nut clan don't use magic, they have a large amount of money and are able to match up to the other. There is a lot of discrimination between the Scarless and Scar-eyed people of Mars.

July 22, 3015, 7:05 PM Inside the Fowl Mansion:

Marvin Fowl was packing a suitcase when…

“Marvin, what are you doing?” His dad asked him.

“Uh…” Marvin didn’t want anyone to know that he was planning on going to Mercury by himself. No he isn’t running away, he just wants to see a certain someone.

“I’m organizing my room!” Marvin said as he chuckled nervously, “Yeah that’s it!”

“Oh really? And when have you ever picked up a single thing in your life?”

“Hey, there’s a first time for everything, right?”

“Yeah, but there is more chances for a second thing for what already happened.” He chuckled.

“Okay fine!” Marvin admitted, “I want to go to Mercury to…Uh, see a friend.”

He didn’t want to say that he promised this someone that he’d visit. He wasn’t sure how his dad would react to it. Promises and him don’t mix in anyone else’s opinion. But he took this promise seriously, and he wasn’t planing on breaking it. He knew how girls were about those kinds of things and he didn’t want to disappoint her.

“You want to go to Mercury? How are you going to get there from Mars? I hope you don’t plan to walk there.” He chuckled again.

“I was just going to look up the spell from one of Marlin’s old spell books.”

“How are you going to use that spell if you could barley cast a simple spell at all?”

“I’ll figure it out.” Marvin said, “I’ll just teach myself.”

“But not even teachers could teach you how to use spells.”

“Teachers? Man, they don’t know what they are talking about!”

“Yeah, and everyone else somehow knows?”

“Well, I said I’d figure it out!”

“You are only 15, I won’t let you go by yourself.”

Martin thought about it as he seen Marvin’s disappointed face. After awhile he continued.

“I suppose, we could all go,” Martin said a little disapproving of what just came out his mouth.

“Yeah!” Marvin cheered as he continued to pack.

“Don’t get too excited. If the others don’t want to go to that heat infested planet, no one’s going.”

“What?” Marvin starred at him. He thought that he was going anyway, even if no one else would go with him.

Martin grinned when he walked out of Marvin’s neat room. (It wasn’t neat before, trust me!)

Now we go to Mercury. Mercury is a planet with the harshest, hottest environment. It is so bad that some areas are cut off and are restricted to be traveled on without some sort of permit. This area is called “Mercury’s sword”.

When the population increased, they created domes, all together known as “Desert Coffin”. (DC)

There is a place that is not so bad an environment but it’s like a desert on earth. This is the place with most population. It is “Mercury City”. (MC) The name doesn’t work at all though because it is too rural to be considered a city, and big enough to be considered a country.

We meet our first but not main character in a region by the name of “Mercury’s halo”. (MH) The area with strange tropical weather, strange for mercury, anyway. This is the area where the rich live in, and then you wonder why MC and DC are poor, it’s because MH is a big dome which destroyed Mercury’s economy. The structure was made out of an artificial atmosphere, which gave it its beautiful weather, even better then most of earth. Thus, Mercury’s Halo has the best atmosphere out of the other 8. They had the knowledge but lacked the money and sometimes you need to know how much you’ll hurt yourself for perfection.

July 22, 3015, 7:15 PM Outside of Raven’s house.

“You’re leaving?” An 18 year-old Flame Nickel asked, “Why?”

He was talking to Raven Morgon who was packing a suitcase.

“Yeah, My parents are moving there,” She answered with a smile.

“But why? You can’t go!” He wined.

“You know you only want me here cuz you can’t afford to be in Mercury’s Halo by yourself.” She was kidding around.

“That’s not true!”

“You could afford to be here?”

“No, I mean… well… I…” He really had a crush on her but like many people he couldn’t admit it, “You’re my friend, I will… miss you.” Well he got closer then many others.

“Aw,” she giggled as he blushed redder then a cherry.

Then he got an idea to why she’d leave; it's a reason that disrupted his dream to be with her.

He gasped with realization; “Oh I get it! You are probably going to see your boyfriend!”

“No. My mom got a job there.”

“So?”

“I have no choice. I have other friends here, you’re not the only one.”

She picked up her bags.

“How could you choose that guy over me? You haven’t seen him in 5 years! I mean... You don’t even know the guy!”

“Don’t be jealous, Flame”

“Jealous? Of Xaara?”

“Okay, okay Flame, you know I like to joke around, don’t get worked up. Just don’t forget to come by before I go!”

She waved him off and he stared at her as she shrunk into the distance.

Finally she was out of sight, and he sighed. He heard another sigh behind him.

“You’re so jealous Flame,” The voice laughed. He was Bobbie, Raven’s brother.

“Where’s you’re luggage, Bobbie?”

“Hm?” he looked confused, “what luggage.”

“Aren’t you going?”

‘Yeah, of course I’m going.”

“Then where’s-“

“This is my luggage,” Bobbie finished as he pointed to the clothes on his back.

Bobbie explained that he didn’t want to stick out in Mercury City. So he was thinking of buying new clothes so he could blend in more.

“Hmf,”Flame thought, “he doesn’t feel like sticking out? Typical!”

“Why do you need us to pay for you?” Bobbie asked, “I thought your uncle was King Jason. Can’t he afford to live here?”

“Yeah but he’s living at Desert Coffin for the same reason Raven is leaving.”

“He’s got a job there? I thought being king was enough.”

“No, he’s in love with some girl!”

“If you say so.” Bobbie said. “Don’t you want to come if Raven’s going? I mean, just so you could make sure no one touches her?” Bobbie laughed.

“I can’t go anyway,” Flame groaned.

“What if I invited you?”

“I’d say ‘okay’, but you’d never do- Wait you’d invite me?”

“Sure, I need more people to talk to. Raven and my mom are girls and therefore don’t have very interesting conversations. And my dad is only interested in the fighting tournaments. I mean you have nobody else here, and then you’d have to go back to Desert Coffin. That place is a wreck.”

“Yeah okay, Bobbie, I’ll go!”

“Meet us at the gate, Okay?”

“Alright!” Flame ran off quickly so he could get packing.

Watch out Xaara Cha, because Raven is mine and off limits!

Little did they know that they were driving themselves into disaster!

If you’re bored, then it will get better. (But I doubt you are). Up ahead are fights and the problems won’t stop. And little by little parts of the characters gets unveiled until it all just fits together perfectly. It isn’t a mystery, but it will be like solving one.

WEEE! My first story on here, WOOT! Review. And if you really liked it, good, because I got many of this story typed already, so read on!