okay, i realize that this isnt the best poem. it was a better idea than it acctually turned out to be. oh well, it's not terrible. i'll post the other version of this poem as a second chapter.

And She Smiled…

A lonely girl went out one day
She didn’t know if she could stay
In this world
She sat in class and tried to think
But tears rolled down her pale cheek
Into her hands
She sat outside all alone
There was no reason to go home
To her life
They all walked by; they didn’t care
Then one stopped; he had brown hair
It was a boy

And she smiled
It was like a rainbow after
A rolling thunderstorm
And she smiled
It was like a sunrise after
A dark and scary night
And she smiled

Boy and girl went out one day
Exploring up and down the way
All over town
They were together, they weren’t alone
And all her happiness, it shone
To everyone
He looked at her and then he said
We’re friends forever until we’re dead
Starting now
Then the rain starts to fall
Jump in one puddle, splash in ‘em all
She had fun

And she smiled
It was like turning on the sun
For the first time
And she smiled
It was like blooming flowers
On a winter day
Ands she smiled

And she smiled
And she laughed
And she was happier than any other
And she smiled
And she laughed
And she was happier than any other…

what did you think? here's other's reactions: -.- yeah so not so great. better luck next time to me...