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Title: Forbidden
Rating: M
Summary: A prisoner and a guard fall in love
Note: Story's pov changes alot
Note 2: All chapters are short to a degree one chapter though is shorter then it should have been because I had cut it off
"Speech"
'thoughts'
'someoneelse's POV during someone's POV(EX. POV: Frederick; I was told I was 'good looking')/terminology'
"powerful feeling"
Normal flashback
Normal timeline/special flashback
(A/N Author's notes)
I’s been five ears to the day since my own daughter was arrested for royal thieft. I still can't believe that she stole from the royal family.
Special Flashback:
"Anne, I'll give you one request" I said and she smiled sadly, "What I want, you can not give, father" she said. I sighed as I dipped my quill into the inkwell and write the request for an empty cell and a new guard.
"Father" said Anne as we walk to the cell, I turn around anbd one of the guards had their hands on her shoulder,"Let her go" I said simply as I take the letter from his hand that was addressed to me. 'Great what does he want now?' I think as I notice it is from the king, "I'll read this later" I said and I get Anne into her cell and walk to my office.
End Flashback
I don't even remember what the letter said, but I do remember threatening the guards with death if they 'touched' the female prisioners
I just walked into the prison from my old guard job-AKA Royal Guard-I don't know why I lost my old job but I walk into the office of the Head Guard. "Hello" he said to me and I nod, he starts to talk about stuff I didn't care to listen too.
I start to explain about the prisoners we have to the new guard AKA to the prisoners(depending on gender or personal likes) Fresh Meat, "I am sure you're wondering why you were tranfered here" I said and Tomas nodded again-I mean does he say anything?-"You are here because my daughter was imprisoned and I do not want her hurt by the other guards". He looked at me like I was mad, well fine I am mad but she is my daughter.
"So I lost my home, my job, my livelyhood, because you wanted someone to protect your daughter?" asked Tomas and Frederick nodded, " Can I count on you?" he asked Tomas. Tomas sighed, "Yes sir" he responded.
It has been awhile since my cellmate died, she was one of my only companions in this hell they call prison. I see my father walking with some 'freshmeat' towards my thing was he didn't look like 'freshmeat'...
Tomas and Frederick walked to Anne's celldoor, "Anne?" called Frederick as he opened the door, "Father?" she answered looking behind the man towards Tomas, "Oh this is Tomas, he will be..." whatever Frederick said was lost to Tomas and Anne as they locked eyes...
'He's looking at me in the eye! He does know I can't do anything, right? He doesn't seem like the other guards... He's smiling! Oh God don't tell me he sees something he likes!'
At same time:
POV: Tomas
'Wow her eyes are beautiful...' I thought and I smile at her, 'She seems afraid... Defiant also...'
POV: Frederick's Thoughts
'I know they're not listening, but I'll continue anyway. So I can say I did my job...'
POV: Third Person
Frederick cleared his throat and Anne and Tomas both jumped, "Now that I have your attention, Anne, Tomas is going to guard you" said Frederick. Anne groaned in complaint...
PhantomHokage(Fanfiction penname) I said I'd give you some credit well here it is I deicate this story as a thanks to ya' but also it is my work from long ago written on paper so I am copying it down and editing some words, adding scenes I didn't think to add the first time round!
