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Minute Avenue
with love to D,
I run through Minute Avenue
or does she run through me?
I jump upon her stepping stones
counting, one jump, two jump, three!
I sing in Minute Avenue
or does she sing in me?
I repeat her prized syllable
till it rings out in jubilee.
I round about Minute Avenue
or does she round about me?
I grow so drunk and dizzy
it’s impossible now to see.
I become lost in Minute Avenue
or does she become lost in me?
I meander through her alleys—
going home is no guarantee.
I find glass encasing Minute Avenue,
or does she find glass encasing me?
I wonder as I wander through
if she’ll – if I’ll – ever be free.
In any case, I'm personally disappointed with how this one turned out and will be experimenting with it a little more—maybe keeping the message but writing a non-rhyming version you can look for in the future.
Yours,
Katja