BookFan06: My first poem for 2008! I hope you enjoy. Review please.

Title: Hatred Swells

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the night falls in a heavy, suffocating cloak, entwined are we.

the salvation for which you sacrifice yourself

flares once, then dies,

swept away by madness.

all hope must surely perish.

your love is no more.

how could you leave me?

angels surround us, crying,

we have lost our way.