I was bored in lunch and the result was this - a poem. Asked a fellow writer and she said I could pass for an emo. o.O Not that I am emo, I'm just goth. Anyway, review please.

Suicide Regret

Drowning, suffocating

Losing breath

Sinking deeper

Into the lake

Seaweed entangling me

Panicking

Lungs bursting

I shouldn't have jumped

These are my last dying breaths

Should've hanged onto life

I miss my family

I miss my friends

I had a bright future

Now all there is is death