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This story was started by two girls at the back of a science room. It was based on a dream... well the ending of a dream. The layout will change throughout; first it is set out as if it was a play or a film script, t then moves onto a more story like set out. I would change it but I wanted you to read it exactly like it was written. Please review and tell us f you like or don’t, and if you want me to rewrite the whole thing in a normal format.
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Sephiroh Clan
Part 1
“Please don’t kill him Lauren, I love him”
“I have
no choice. He’ll feed on you. He’s after your blood, not your
heart.”
“He loves me, he already has my heart, he cares for
me… I care for him. That’s all that should matter.”
“No. I can’t let you be fooled anymore.”
“It’s my choice! I never should have told you! Why won’t you see him for what he is?”
“I already see him for what he is! A Vampire! And… I have a confession to make… I knew about you two before you told me….”
“What!
You knew! How could you? Look Lauren, stay away from us, I can’t
even look at you.”
“Hunters and Vampires have a loose psychic
connection. Its strength vanes depending on how recently a Vampire
has been feeding. His didn’t seem that strong. But, Anna, he told
me he was specifically after you. I have to stop him, or he
will kill you!”
“How can
I believe you? You just showed me I can’t trust you. All I think
you are doing is lying to ruin me and Jacob. All I want to know is
why?”
“Anna, I
Couldn’t give
A damn
About your
relationship with him. You need to stay away from him. He’s a
typical Vampire. He’d tell you anything to drink your insides dry.
You’ve barely known him for a week. You’ve known me practically
for all of your life! I have no reason to lie to you!”
“You’ve
already lied to me, you never told me you knew. And, he doesn’t
kill, you would know that if you had listened to us. He’s not that
type of vampire. He’s part of a different group. I wish you would
trust me. But it doesn’t matter anymore, don’t come near us
again. Please, it’s all I ask”
Anna turns to walk
away
“Anna… Look at me… LOOK AT ME! Fine, turn your
back. But know this… Different group. No offence Anna, but I
thought you wouldn’t sit down and be spoon-fed bullshit by a pretty
face. He’s no storybook vampire. They don’t resist. They don’t
take a little at a time. They don’t choose fucking donors. They
don’t care. He doesn’t care…”
stops and exhales
“But. As
you wish. Good luck Anna. Wherever it takes you.”
Turns and
is ready to leave, silently crying. Takes out tranquilizer gun from
inside of coat
“Sweet Dreams”
Points tranquilizer
gun behind her, fires, and hits Anna in left arm
“I’m so
sorry.”
XXX
“Mmnmm”
Where am I?
She looks around and finds herself in a
dark room with stone walls and stone walls and stone floors. The room
was bare except for the straw bed on the floor, the chamber pot
across the room, and the chair close by. It was pitch black but she
could see perfectly
The door opens and Lauren walks
in
“Hello Anna.”
Walks in front of her
“You
came around quicker than I expected. When your senses fully return,
you will feel the ropes around you, and the gag in your mouth. We
don’t want to take any unnecessary risks now, do we?”
Anna
struggled
“I’m sorry that it’s so uncomfortable, heck,
I’ve been in your situation before, and I know the rope burn can
get pretty nasty. But away with the jokes. I can’t have you
interrupting my rendezvous with Jacob. We’ll have a lovely chat.
About his habits… shame he won’t be sticking around for much
longer. I took the dart out of your arm by the way. Watch you don’t
put to much pressure on it. It’s going to bruise. But I can’t
bandage the rest of you up. I’ll loose track of time. And I need to
be punctual for once.”
Picks up guns and puts in
holsters
“So, you behave yourself and sit still.”
Anna
struggles and knocks the chair over, loosening the rope. Lauren does
not realise. Anna keeps deadly still.
“Oh for Christ sakes
Anna, must you ALWAYS DEFY ME?”
Picks up knife and puts it
in garter strap.
“Oh, look at the time. I’ll have to leave
you there, see you soon.”
Walks out
“I wont forget
to lock the door either.”
As Lauren locks the door Anna
tears off the ropes, and shoves the door open, sending Lauren flying
backwards into a stone wall. Her head makes a collision with it, and
she lies slumped against it, presumable knocked out. As Anna moves
past her, Lauren catches Anna’s arm and throws her to the floor.
Lauren pulls her knife out and holds it to Anna’s throat.
“I
said Breathless keep. Out. Of. My. Way.”
Lauren puts
knife back and delivers a knock-out punch to Anna’s jaw
“Time
to go”
Lauren pulls a shotgun from the wall, and exits,
locking the heavy wooden door behind her.
XXX
.Idiot!
Anna
sat up laughing
I’m so glad my bones are stronger, or
that would have broken my jaw.
Anna stood up and walked
towards the door
“You Kick Stupid Kick BITCH
Kick ”
The door flies open and Anna walks
through.
“God I love being a vampire.”
XXX
Shit
Runs
through forest
She got out
Pauses to breath
How the
hell did she get out?
Starts running again after footsteps
are heard sonic style
She knows I can’t keep him alive.
Why can’t she just stay back? He’ll live forever but she won’t.
But I’m a fool to think her heart will heal.
Runs to chalet door where Jacob is staying
Memento Mon.
opens door, looks out, and shuts it behind her
XXX
Jacob Venezeri, son of Upierczi the feared and Countess Elizabeth Bathory… Tonight you die.
Heavy breathing and a growl fade into the watery silence. Lauren walks up toward an open… and EMPTY casket
XXX
“I love
flying! Why don’t we do it more often?”
“I really don’t
know”
Anna swerved under Jacob, missing his wings by an
inch.
“That was really close, I told you to wait out back
till I got there!”
“I did!
But I heard her coming through the woods so I had to fly outta
there!”
“Hmm”
Anna
threw him a sceptical look before laughing
“Just kidding.
But if I had landed I could have got that kiss you promised
me.”
“Don’t worry pet, you’ll get one when we get
there.”
“Get where?”
“You’ll see”
Jacob flew
in front with Anna following curiously
Where the fuck are
we going?
XXX
Lauren
sits alone in a chair in the dark of Jacobs chalet.
“I
fucking missed him!”
Slams fist into the wall
Ah…
that hurt
Lights
cigarette and takes a long drag.
I needed that.
looks
at casket… and smiles
“Idea…”