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She told me I had
canvas hands and
paintbrush hair. She
said it like
I could create
something exquisite without tracing our outlines
against the
windowframe.
She told me my lips
were stamps and
my tongue was an eraser
that made her forget all my mistakes.
She told me that my
ears were cups that caught
any excess
and absorbed it, and
mixed it in
with all the other
dissolution.
She told me my eyelids
were my palette, that
every shade of grey
pooled against their edges
when I opened my eyes
when I opened my eyes
I reminded her that
I am not art —
I am a piece of work.
I said it like
it was dark, like we
were paintings facing the walls
in separate rooms.
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A/N: Three guesses which two I have actually been told. Also, points if you recognized the pun in "dissolution."
I'm rusty, I know. Not the best poem I've ever written, but I needed to shed a few layers of overwrought descriptors anyhow, and this was the easiest way to do it.
I feel lighter.
Kind of sort of dedicated to Violet Marx, who has stuck by me no matter how far I wander from the world of writing on my various hiatuses and self-finding quests; and who consequently still requests new pieces and reminds me that my butt could use with some kicking into a more productive gear.