
wasnt the original concept but it turned into this. seems odd to label it life. Please R&R
Rated: Fiction K+ - English - Poetry/Tragedy - Words: 103 - Published: 01-22-08 - Status: Complete - id: 2466093
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Blood still runs through warm veins
Mitochondria respiring in ecstasy
Of supplemented survival,
Heart still pumps steadily,
Never faltering, not once
Breathing continues quietly,
Gentle rasping as chest rises
And falls - only to rise again
Skin still warm, and slightly dewy
With unnecessary perspiration
(Perhaps the breathing is an effort?)
Soundwaves still work their way
Towards empty ears, 'though
No response is noticed and for sure,
No nerves react normally to outside
Stimuli and the brain shows no
Reactive pattern. 'Tis unthinkable to
Press certain buttons in crucial decision;
Even as the lines on the monitor
Just seem to monitor nothing at all.
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