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Emma Gammon
Author of 3 Stories
Rated: M - English - Romance/Supernatural - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 02-25-09 - Published: 01-24-08 - id:2467029

Hi there.

Yes the chapters are gone. Kind of 83

I deleted them only because the story is finished and I want to rewrite the clean manuscript. There are a lot of reasons for that and here's some:

It has many flaws in many things, such as unneeded scenes and lack of them.

There were certain details that left many twilighters on the edge, if you know what I mean =/

I had put (and here's a SPOILER) a pregnancy that is ABSOLUTELY RELEVANT TO THE STORY OF THE SERIES. I can't take it out, but the fact that when I read Breaking Dawn it had something similar in there (I had the idea for it in March of the year it was published, including the last volume of the series being about the child to be born.) Unfortunately seeing the darn plot of BD revolving all about that I was disappointed. I couldn't even write for several months more of it. So I ended up writing all fast not caring of details and only about reaching an end to the story.

I know my characters better right now than I did when I started the story. I can understand better Elisabeth's stoicism and ability of comprehension, and Eric's constant passivism and latent sadness and yearnings.

I wanted to go back to writing the second book of the series, which still annoys me as I can't decide in which language to write it first and if I should publish it online at all.

That being said, once I'm at university by the end of September and with my OWN laptop, I'll be writing everything from zero.

Thank you. I hope you'll stick with me.

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