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Author: Cross Rose
Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Romance - Reviews: 2 - Published: 01-30-08 - Updated: 02-04-08 - Complete - id:2469789

While walking home, and dodging puddles of water along the way, she looked up into the puring rain.Night had fallen.

Street lights beginning to light up the empty streets. Afters staring up into the rain, she regains her touch of reality, and keeps going.
Only moments after she begane walking, she thought she heard someones footsteps, only feet behind her.
She turned to her side to find a boy following her.
It was him, her one and only wanting, her desire. Her need, for life's only matter.
His black hair sticking to his wet, pale face. With priecing green eyes, full of remorse, staring into hers.
She stared back, with heartache in her eyes, and fear in her chest.
"What do you want!?" She cryed in fear with her tears threatening to show, but the boy did nothing but smile.
"Alice, it is me, Vince...remember?" He asked her somberly, but Alice only stared at him, in the pouring rain, unsure how to reply.
"Yes," Alice gasped, "but, why are you here?" She asked anxously, not knowing how to feel about this, but only one thing remained in her.
Fear.
Fear of it all. Fear of it all happening again, all so very suddenly without any expention.
Here he was, without any reason, he was standing only mear feet from her, staring at her with eyes full of remorse.
Anxiety on the verge of drowning Alice into bitterness, into loath. But she felt none. Only hysteria from it all.
Still smiling, Vince cocked his head to his side, "Because," he whispered breathlessly, Alice stared in confusion, awaiting her answer. Suddenly, she was pinned up against the alleyway brick wall.
She opened her eyes to see the cause of it all, and saw that it was Vince.
Alice stared into his eyes with fear, but yet, felt a spark of hope.
His nose bearly touching hers, his breath hot on her cold, wet face. His hands warpped in Alice's damp hair, although Alice did not seem to care. Suddenly Vince's lips were crushed into Alice's.
Alice's body went numb, the sensation of having him on her was to much, her body went limp.
Vince's arms immeadetly snaked around her waist, breaking him from her lips.
Alice rolled her head, and out of fear remained quiet.
"What's wrong?" Vince asked in horror. Alice said nothing, and all of a sudden, her world faded.
"Alice!?"


Okay, so I re-wrote this, and tried to make it better. Like always, please review.

Cross Rose



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