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Author: TinyDancer37
Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Published: 01-31-08 - Updated: 01-31-08 - Complete - id:2470050

AN: I wrote this in English class when we were susposed to be watching a movie. Please tell me what you think because I really want to know what I need to do to improve or what you like/dislike about it.

Before and End, There is a Beginning

Ice cold hands wipe away the tears,

Nothing can stop me,

Not even fear.

The end is coming soon,

As the clock ticks,

I stare at the full moon.

Blood trickles down my arm,

Although most people would disagree,

It is not self harm.

Without me, here will be a better place.

As my vision fades,

In the mirror I see my pale face.

A whirlwind of thoughts run though my head,

I made a mistake,

All hope is not dead.

When I awake all I see is white.

Across from me sits a boy,

He’s my love, he’s my knight.

I owe him my life,

and he asks “Why?”

As he holds the knife.

He is my love and my friend.

Because of him,

I’ll start a new beginning and finish to the end.

AN: Please review!!

-TinyDancer37-



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