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AN: I wrote this in English class when we were susposed to be watching a movie. Please tell me what you think because I really want to know what I need to do to improve or what you like/dislike about it.
Before and End, There is a Beginning
Ice cold hands wipe away the tears,
Nothing can stop me,
Not even fear.
The end is coming soon,
As the clock ticks,
I stare at the full moon.
Blood trickles down my arm,
Although most people would disagree,
It is not self harm.
Without me, here will be a better place.
As my vision fades,
In the mirror I see my pale face.
A whirlwind of thoughts run though my head,
I made a mistake,
All hope is not dead.
When I awake all I see is white.
Across from me sits a boy,
He’s my love, he’s my knight.
I owe him my life,
and he asks “Why?”
As he holds the knife.
He is my love and my friend.
Because of him,
I’ll start a new beginning and finish to the end.
AN: Please review!!
-TinyDancer37-