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Fairytale
Soccer ball hand in hand
He thought that things were great
She thought that maybe this would work
But they couldn’t mess with fate
Soccer, school, and lots of people
Kept tearing them apart
They would yell and they would scream
Fighting seemed to start
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Soccer kept on driving him
Until he was dead and tired
He was beat and covered with bruises
So not what he desired
Why does she always have to change
Whenever her friends were there
Because when she was with him
She really seemed to care
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Her only resolution she had for herself
Was to make him hurt no more
All the grief she’d caused him
Was so much worse than before
Her friends had gone too far this time
Something she wouldn’t be able to fix
They told him some rumors and a couple lies
Just them and their mean tricks
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Schoolyard fairy tales don’t always come true
Just keep the faith and make sure to love and let go
Because who knows what happened on that soccer field.
Not so long ago.
A/n.
I had to write this for school, and the girls who peer edited my work didn't get the poem, because they didn't really get what was going on. They understood the fact that it was a boy and a girl who liked each other, and the girl's friend's had ruined it because they had spread rumors and lies.
What they didn't understand about this poem is that I meant it for it to have a hopeful ending. Because no one knows what happened. The reader could imagine what happened at the end, whether or not the teen girl changed her "follow-the-leader" ways and he gave her a chance to be forgiven, or if they just let what people think and say control their lives.
Another point I had to keep explaining was that the boy was not angry with the rumors and the lies. He was mature enough to look past that, knowing it probably wasn't true. He was more angry with the girl for "changing" whenever her so called friends were around.
Haha, that was a lot of explaining for a tiny poem. Hope you liked it!