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Author: Midnight In Eden
Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Poetry - Reviews: 6 - Published: 02-04-08 - Updated: 02-04-08 - Complete - id:2471808
The Vision of Existence

The pinhole in the camera
revealed fiery depths:
reality is phantasmic.

I smoked a menthol,
leaning against
weathered brick.
Urban static futility :
A two dimensional figure,
birth marked but nothing
to signal this death.

Chain link personified, I was
perfume, a misguided martyr -
now in absentia. The lost links
fractured my fragile back,
as I craned to view the eternity

that we had conspired to create.

I am no longer
humanity

but my splintered fingernails
tell a different story.

a/n: Most recent incarnation of a piece that is meant to be utterly illuminating but fails to live up to its potential. I can only blame myself.



© Copyright 2008 Midnight In Eden (FictionPress ID:432054).


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