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Author: Classychik
Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/General - Reviews: 112 - Published: 02-09-08 - Updated: 07-21-08 - id:2473465

Ok i know you guys must hate me for not updating, but I do have this thing you call a life. School, acting , and blah blah have all been in the way of me updating on this story. Oh and did I mention I got grounded again, I know I'm a bad cookie. But I'm not even supposed to be on the computer right now, but I'm on it anyways because I don't want you people losing faith in my updates. Trust me later on, you'll be getting updates like every other day during the summer, 'cause I'll have nuthin better to do. Anyways I know you didn't open this page so you could see me ramble on and on about my life, 'cause you don't even know me. Anyways here's chapter 14!!


Wait a minute, isn't her boyfriend African American and hot. Who's that boy who was kissing on her neck, then?

Ally smiled and waved at me, she handed her bowling ball to the blond boy, whispered something in his ear and started making her way over to where I was standing. Is she crazy, she's with a totally different boy and she wants to act like nothings happening.

The blond boy grabbed her by her wrist and pulled her close to him. He kissed her lips, before letting her go. Ally gave a fake smile and an eye roll once her back was to the boy. Why would Ally roll her eyes? She waved and smiled like a maniac as she came closer,

“Hey Bri, I can't believe your here.” she said, coming closer. Her voice caught Daniel's attention, as he turned around with a pair of rental bowling shoes in hand.

“What size are you?” he asked, holding up his shoes, completely ignoring Ally.

“A 7 ½” I answered.

“Hey Al, I should say the same thing, but my question should be directed to just exactly who are you here with?” I asked, glancing over her shoulder at the blond boy. She looked back at the boy, before rolling her eyes once again.

“Oh him, that's Kasy, my about to be ex- boyfriend. He goes to Rice University, we hooked up with one another last year. I'm breaking up with him tonight though, partly because I know he's been cheating on me and the other part is because Justin and I go together, now.” she answered, smiling.

Oh so that's why she's here with him. Phew! I was starting think she was a whore or something, 'cause I've been friends with people like that and it's not been the very blessed experience. I gave Ally a reassuring look, before smiling.

“Ok that explains so much, I was starting to wonder if you were on of those cheating whores.” I chuckled lightly. Ally seemed offended at first, but her eyes showed understanding as she chuckled with me.

“Yeah I know, huh? He's really starting to get on my nerves.” she said just above a whisper, loud enough for me to hear.

“Are yall just getting here?” I asked, changing the subject.

“Yeah, we just came from Olive Garden. After this Kasy's going to take me home, then that's when I'm going to drop the bomb on him.” Ally said, biting her lower lip.

“How long is he in town for?” I asked. Ally's hazel-gray eyes glanced back at the blond boy, then to me.

“He's going to be in town for a couple of more days.” she said. My own eyes flickered with intuition as they met the deep blue colored eyes, that belonged to Kasy. The blond grinned charmingly my way, as he picked up a bowling ball. I rolled my eyes and crossed my arms. I can sort of follow where Ally's going with the cheating part on Kasy's behalf. Kasy winked at me with that stupid charming smile plastered on his face. I have to admit the boy was certainly raising the roof in the looks department, but as far as I can tell from faithfulness...uhm...I don't thinks so.

“He's sending flirtatious looks your way right now, isn't he?” Ally predicted with a bored look upon her face.

“Uh...yeah...how'd you know?” I said, glancing back at the cute blond.

“Typical Kasy, even he can't stop flirting with girls, when I'm around.” she said, an irked expression crossing her face.

“How do you know he flirts with other girls?” I flipped my hair over my shoulders.

“He used to flirt with the half the girl population at our school last year when we first got together.” she said, crossing her arms together.

“He looks like the type to that kind of bull shit.” I said, glancing one more time at the blond boy.

“So...how do you know he's cheating then, he could just be doing harmless flirting.” I casually pointed out.

“Bria, I used to be friends with so many seniors in my freshman, sophomore, and now junior year. Half of them were smart enough to go to Rice University and trust me they check on him secretly for me.” she said, glancing over my shoulder at Daniel.

“ How do you know their telling the truth?” her eyes roamed to the top of my head.

“We're in lane eleven.” a deep masculine voice said from behind.

I craned my neck around and led my gaze to the emerald green eyes that looked down at me. Daniel's face expressionless, he didn't even smile or anything as to greet or acknowledge Ally. His eyes stayed trained on me, never once his eyes flickered over to Ally, it was like he was trying to ignore her or something.

“Ok I'll be there in a sec.” I said. With that Daniel trudged away with both of our bowling shoes in hand, he glanced back once or twice but only to see me. To my surprise Ally didn't seem offended or anything like that about his behavior, it was like she was used to it or something.

“Is he always like that to people?” I asked in a hushed voice. I waited for about a second or two, but Ally never replied. I finally took my eyes off of Daniel, only to find Ally watching intently on Daniel's walking figure. She bit her lower lip hard as her eyes danced along the lines of checking him out. “Huh...?” she said in a trance like voice.

“Ally...Ally...Al-ly” I pronounced the last word into two syllables, as I waved my hand in her face. She finally came back to reality, and sort of jumped a little, now furiously blushing at the fact that she was checking my date out in front of me.

“Oh, sorry.” she said, smiling a small smile in embarrassment.

“Did you even hear what I just said.” “No...not really, what'd you say?” she asked, her attention now fully on me and me only.

“I said does he always act like that to people.” I re-asked my question.

“Yep, ever since his mom died in that car accident last year. Poor thing he never was the same after that, he used to be so nice then, now he's just plain cold. I'm surprised you even came here with him, after the things I've told you about him this afternoon. Your a brave girl you know.” she said, taking a quick glimpse over my shoulder.

“Things about him? What are you talking about? You never told me anything about him.” I said, my heart rate speeding a bit. What is she talking about? I'm a brave girl, what the hell is that supposed to mean?

“I didn't tell you what he did to that boy last year, or anything about his recent girlfriends?” she said, her voice going higher with curiosity.

“No, you just said you thought he really liked me.”

“Are you serious, that's all I told you?”

“Yeah, what more is to him?” “Well last year this senior named Randy he was trying to hit on one of Daniel's girls. Word got out to Daniel, let's just say Daniel accidentally pushed that kid down the stairs. And rumor has it that, that Randy kid is still in a coma from that one 'accident' Daniel did in the beginning of the year.

” I started to laugh, was Ally serious? That sounds nothing like Daniel, Daniel wouldn't hurt a fly. I looked over at Ally, but not a trace of humor lit up her eyes, or no trace of a smile tugged at the corners of her thin lips.

“I'm serious.” she said, obviously detecting the humor traced in my expression. Then again, I don't know Daniel that well, but telling from his actions he seems like a sweet kid. Oh but what happened earlier at Burger king was not a sweet gesture, maybe Ally's telling the truth. “Or did I tell you that he sells drugs and he sometimes hits on his girlfriends.” she spilled out.

“Huh?”

“Yeah I know you heard me. We found out he hit's on his girls last year in the second semester... I think. Yeah it was the second semester, his old girlfriend Melissa came up to the school with a bruise the size of a baseball around her eye. She told everyone that Daniel hit her, but Daniel denied the fact. Ever since that girlfriend, he's never been claimed to hitting a girl after that.” she said, now nodding her heard in shame for Daniel.

“Girlfriends? How many girlfriends has he had?” I asked.

“Too many if you ask me. He goes with like all of the black girls at our school and he goes with some white ones. But their not really girlfriends, more like his hoes, because all they ever do Is blow him or fuck him for like a week, then the next whore.” she said, casually.

“Bria are you coming?” Daniel called out from across the bowling Alley, interrupting Ally and I's conversation. Ally looked at me then Daniel, “I'll talk to you later Bri, I have to get back to my date anyways.” Ally said, starting to walk off. “Ally wait,” I grabbed her by elbow. “Don't leave me here with him alone.” I muttered loud enough for her ears. Ally looked back at me,

“Chill out, If you've made it this far with him, he probably won't try anything. I have to go, though. Call me tonight and tell me what happens, ok.” she said, easing my nerves just a tad.

“Uhm...Ally I'm not sure about this.” truly I was scared, what if he hit me or something.

“You have my number, right?” she asked, reaching for her purse.

“Remember you gave it to me earlier today.” I said. “Oh yeah,”

“Ally please don't leave me.” I said, scared to death.

“Just call me if anything happens.” Ally started walking off.

“I'll see you later girl.” she waved, as she made her way back to Kasy's arms.

Okay this is scary, horrifying, terrible, all at the same time. Well maybe the words all mean the same thing, but that's just how scared I am! What if he hits me because I won't have sex with him. Because I'm expecting he's going to want to get in my pants by tonight judging by his history and all. Oh dear God help me. I made my way down to lane eleven, almost about to piss on myself. Daniel looked back his emerald eyes meeting my goldish- brown ones(they look really weird and pretty at the same time) A smile appeared across his face melting the cold, hard mask he put on earlier for Ally.

“Ready to bowl.” he grinned showing off his perfect straight white teeth, making his tan skin look even darker.


Ok How did you like it, if you didn't like it tell me what you didn't like about it, and I'll make some changes to it. 'Cause personally i ddn't like it. I just post it up for yall, cause it seems like everything I don't like, you guys like. But anyway if ur new at reading this, thanks for reading I really appreciate your time and I would appreciate it even more if you left a review. Because review's are what makes the world in my stories go around. Anyways I luv all u peoples who be reviewing my stories! ReViEw like the Wind!!

luv ur autHoR

Classy chik!!:D



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