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A/N: Sestina, written for a class poetry unit. Please feedback. Concrit is always appreciated.
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I
doubt there’s any feeling more powerful than love.
The
jaded among us say it brings only pain.
I
don’t know much,
but
I know that they’re wrong,
I
know that love is a creation of some great heavenly artist
who
only wanted what was best for us.
The
word still sends shivers of elation down my spine. “Us.”
I’ve
waited all my life for someone to love.
You’re
perfect. You’re flawless. You’re an artist
with
words. One little phrase makes all the pain
vanish.
My friends say I’m wrong
to
say it’s love, so early, but I know this much:
itis
love, pure love, and you deserve so much
more
than I can give back, but the two of us
were
meant to be. I can’t be wrong
about
this. You always recognize love,
it
takes your knees out from under you. A little pain,
yes,
but when you’re finally together, it’s worth it. It takes an
artist,
it
would take a million artists
to
truly describe it. They’ve tried, of course. Much
of
the world’s art is love: love found, love lost, the pain
that
seems to just be a part of it. But not with us.
Never
with us. Because this is love,
plain
and simple, and whoever says otherwise is wrong.
How
can they say that? How can they say that you’re wrong
for
me? You’re an artist,
you’re
insightful, you’re fantastic, and I’m in love
and
no one can take that away from me, no matter how much
they
think they know. They don’t know me, the don’t know us,
they
don’t know what we have, something strong enough to gloss over the
pain
(for
the most part)
I
mean, it’s normal for love to be painful
(of
course it is, it’s all normal)
and
it’s not like either of us did anything wrong
(except
you did)
but
we’ll overlook that for now because of us
(are
we still an us?)
I
know I’m a me, and you’re a you, a con-artist
(except
you’re not, unless you are)
and
I want more than anything to believe you, I want so much
(please)
for
everything to go back to the way it was
(so
I could say that I was still in love)