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Hey! I have to write and act out a monologue piece for English, and this is what I came up with. Reviews and criticism would be much appreciated!
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In November nineteen seventy-five at the age of twenty, Verity Taylor was charged by the police with the damage of a chair by fire, value six pounds, in a locked ward of a mental hospital where she was a patient. She was remanded in custody to Holloway Prison for a period of three months. She was subsequently tried at Canterbury Crown Court and in February nineteen seventy-six an order was made for her admission to a maximum security hospital. On February the twenty-fourth, nineteen seventy-six, Verity Taylor was admitted to Broadmoor from where she may not be transferred elsewhere without the permission of the Home Secretary.
In class? I was the smart one. Sure, I was quiet, reserved. Never played with the rest of the kids. But I always helped the teachers. Always answered when asked a question, always gave the correct answer. And this is what I get.
Was it because of that time I told that old couple, Ted and Dora that I had been raped when I was 16? Because, that was ages ago, when I was in the ward, H twenty-two. I didn’t have Sister Moses back then. Sure, I was in the same building – but she was in the real bad section.
(shifts closer) You don’t think I’m crazy, do you?