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your hand
fights the
wind
in December.
You light
you flatten your cheeks
and
you inhale.
You're my hero
you're my superior
I once looked
up to you.
But now we've hit this
odd tempation
in our
lives.
We've met some people
done some things
gone through
troubles.
I remember
when we first met.
We were kids
we
were young
but never innocent.
We held hands
and ran down
the beach
with curly, blonde hair.
We sat in our tree house
and
pretended the knots
in the wood
were people.
We mowed lawns
together
when we were older.
We sang songs
you played
guitar
and I sang.
We ate marshmallows
until we both
got
sick.
we hang out.
Then you take your hand
that is
ungloved
in the nose of winter
and flick a switch.
You smile
at me.
You tell me I'm your best friend.
You say, "hey,
wanna join me?"
I say
Why did you let me down?
You
shrug
and take a drag
claiming you'll never be happy
without
it.
What about us?
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Hey fellow fictioners. I hope ya liked the poem. Reviews are great, as always. This one is about the discovery and realization that some of my friends are smokers. Kinda put me into lame shock for a while. Before recently my world has only seen innocent things, I guess. Anyway, thanks again!