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Author: Take the Money and Run
Fiction Rated: K - English - Drama/Romance - Reviews: 6 - Published: 03-09-08 - Updated: 03-09-08 - Complete - id:2486396

Every time I think I might
Be the one for you
Every time I think I’m right
This idea suddenly falls through

You talked with me
You sat with me
But I guess the truth
I couldn’t see

I thought she was over
I thought she was through
You always told me
She was no interest to you

But you don’t know
That I read the note
Filled with sorrow
By the words you wrote

I’m trying to stop thinking of you
But it’s just too hard
I’m giving these letters back to you
To get you out of my mind

And you never
Watched me die
And you never
Saw me cry

You’ll never know
The pain in my throat
And you’ll never know
That I read the note


I really don't know how this one came out so feedback on this one will be very helpful... and tell me if it all makes sense please. I'm hoping i won't have to change too much...


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