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Kanna-sama: For me, the return of poetry is a bad sign of my current mental state.
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Title: The World Is Crumbling Around Me
Rating: K
Genre: Poetry
Summary: Complete. The world is crumbling around me like an unsteady roof. God has sent His furious stallion on me, to beat me with his hoof. Poetry.
Notes/Warnings: Poetry; religious references; complete
Rules of this poem: each stanza six lines each; there must be some kind of rhyme to each stanza; title must be included only once in each stanza; the sentences of each stanza must have an understandable rhythm.
Note on the Rules: I generally stick to only one or two rules in my poems, so this was a bit new for me.
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The World Is Crumbling Around Me
The world is crumbling around me,
Like an unsteady roof.
God has sent His furious stallion on me,
To beat me with his hoof.
I can see I cannot stop it,
For He stands above me, angry, looming from His pulpit.
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And even now I see,
How desolate I may be,
Because the world is crumbling around me,
Like the roaring, clashing sea.
The waters beat me mercilessly,
And now I know for certain,
That no longer am I free.
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The world is crumbling around me,
But no one else can see this;
It tumbles and crashes and roars,
Through my mind, now a hazy mist.
I run and scream and holler through all these open doors,
But there are no answers from Him,
Nor shall there ever be.
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The lightning shatters across the sky,
Awakening all of those who sleep.
And no matter how I try,
I cannot escape this pain He can reap.
The world is crumbling around me,
This has become obvious to me.
Finis
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Kanna-sama: The repetition of the title was on purpose. The first four lines came to me randomly. I generally have stopped writing poetry, so I am a bit disturbed by this sudden inspiration of it; I have only written poetry in the most unpleasant time of my life. In any case, please leave a review telling me how you liked it. Ciao.