|I Can't See
Author: Aithein Rosen PM
Something I wrote for a literature project. Do review! XDRated: Fiction T - English - Tragedy - Words: 347 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 03-12-08 - Status: Complete - id: 2488162
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Your lips shaped words I'll never hear.
Your delirious eyes were lustrous with tears of fear.
I'll never hear your voice again.
I'll never see those gorgeous eyes open ever again.
Pain was the prelude of your death
"Let me go," had been what you said in your last breath.
It was bitter tears that I cried,
Because in letting go, I betrayed my heart when you died.
We had known your life was not long,
And so loving each other drew hurt and was wrong.
Your life had been so full of pain,
I should have been happy you will never feel it again.
"I'll see you again in your sleep.
So my beloved, in my name please cease to weep,"
You promised while holding my hand.
I had said," Please don't leave, there's still so much I don't understand."
But you went, leaving me to scream
"I beg of you God, please grant me this last wish
If I could meet her when I dream,
I beg of you God, please grant my soul an eternal sleep."
And yet, he didn't hear my prayer
I can't see you, my love, no matter how I dream.
And yet, he didn't grant my wish
I can't hear you, my love, no matter how I try to scream
Was that all you had ever been?
A mere whisper of memory, all that could have been?
Was that all you ever were,
I don't know, but because you promised, I'll still be waiting here.
I am being blinded, my heart
I'm being blinded, my heart, being blinded by my tears
I am being deafened, my heart
I'm being deafened, my heart, being deafened by my fears
So well... What do you think? Do review, and offer your comments so I can improve!! And hopefully score better grades Like yeah... Its meant to be a ballad by the way.