
I still remember he had pancakes and coffee for breakfast...
Rated: Fiction K - English - Words: 214 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 2 - Published: 03-13-08 - Status: Complete - id: 2488284
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Pancakes and Coffee
I
remember your crinkly smile and those crooked teeth
And
the way you tossed your hair.
I
remember the deep laugh you had,
And
your twinkling clear sky eyes.
(What
went wrong?)
I
remember the way you ate pancakes for breakfast
Whenever
you felt troubled.
I
remember the cup of sugar(free) milk(free) coffee
Always
by your side.
I
remember you used to tell me
That
nothing is ever as bad as it seems.
I
remember you saying,
"Just
eat pancakes for breakfast and
A
cup of sugar(free) milk(free) coffee,
And you will feel free."
This
morning when I woke (at 11:59am)
I
had pancakes for breakfast
That
cup of sugar(free) milk(free) coffee
But
I still felt downcast
Distressed,
desolate, dejected.
(So
what did I do wrong?)
Those
pancakes
And
that cup of sugar(free) milk(free) coffee
Only left me feeling hollow and empty
Like how you made me feel
When you left me.
A/N: Yeah... I kind of just stared up at the ceiling and typed this all out. It's a very rough draft. I haven't written like this in a while... most of the previous poems I've written are all rhyme. Please tell me what you think!
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