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Note: I just found this file on my computer from creative writing last semester and thought I'd see what people thought.
Just Thought You Should Know
By StrixAluco
I saw a dancer
Caught in motion.
Her skirt swirled ‘round,
A blur of fabric:
Red. It’s passion’s color.
Those soft auburn curls
Caught my fancy.
Your eyes a child’s,
Sweet, wide, innocent:
Pure. My own Prince Charming.
With that dance I
Caught her knowledge.
Dance is delight,
So evanescent:
Gone. Love is just the same.
And one day you were
Caught in a lie.
I adored you,
But you led me on:
Fake. Broken hearts don’t heal.