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Hey this is my second submit- my second poem so be nice- because this is my pride and joy i said i was considering submitting
“Waiting here for you”
I'm standing here, waiting for you
With dreams so sweet and memories too
But sadly it's your memories that have been taken
And your destiny here with me in which has been forsaken
I see you now, still as beautiful as ever
But with lost eyes and emotionless thoughts that seem they shall remain forever
I still love you dearly, wholly and true
But you're always beyond my reach and into the hue
I still think of the day in which the war ended
And we stood our grounds, doing what is right and defended
In a moments flash my heart turned to stone
As I saw you fall and thought I was alone
I saw your blood escaping your body and head
And it was then my heart broke as I thought you were dead
I felt tears run down my face as I shook my head in disbelief
And my hands curled up into fists, controlling my anger and grief
When I saw you stir my heart became whole again
And I cried in relief and felt like dancing in the rain
But something was not right as you opened your eyes
Yous seemed to see me as a soldier in a clever disguise
Then you said the words that sent a shiver down my spine
You asked who I was and if this was the end of your time
I felt the full force of a dagger pierce my heart
I tired to reach out to you before my heart falls apart
Just like that my dreams were shattered and broken
I refused to understand how these words could have been spoken
With every passing day I looked after my love
Praying for your memories, to the skies above
And with every new day I was gravely disappointed
For it seemed your memories would never return and we would be never be anointed
The time is passing slowly as I feel my pain
As I watch your expression turn form fear to shame
Every morning I ask if you remember me
But all you do is shake your head aggressively
Your strong soul and heart is what kept you alive
But to see you like this I doubt if I can survive
But this I will, for it is all I can do
To help you remember and give back your life to you
In my heart I know, as I trust in fate
That you will come back to me, even if a little late
I feel the hole in my heart grow bigger with every passing day
And the thoughts in my head are as hollow as the words that I say
I still have hope and still wait for you
I wait for your memories and our destiny to come true
I long for the warmth you once gave me
But there has been nothing but emptiness for what seems like eternity
I feel the loneliness as I hold onto love
As I see your former self, the peaceful white dove
But that side of you is aloft and out of place
Not where is belongs, right here with me so I can see the light on your face
My growing love is making me sick
And the sorrow in my heart is weighted like a brick
The only way to save my life
Is to come back to me dearest, through all this strife
I am dying my love, because you are not here
But our memories will live on for others to hear
I wish you were here with all my might
So I could kiss you one last time, before I see the light
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I know you are dying my love and I cannot bear to see your pain
But though my love for you is deep, I feel so lame
I love you my dearest with all my heart
Although through this time we have seemed to fall apart
I wish I could save you, I would if I could
But my memories seem nonexistent and hollow as dry old wood
I tired to reach out for you, tell you who I am
But all I managed to do was build myself a dam
I feel cold and alone and I see you fake a smile
I can see through your mask and remember, if only for a while
When I remember I know it will hurt
To remember the lives that I took and the love that I hurt
Hold on my darling, don't leave me here
Don't let me remember only to fall into a world of despair
I love you my darling and you are worth the fight
So hold onto me closely, hold on with all your might
I will fight for you, for your warm touch
Even if all I have to fight with is not very much
I honestly believe I can save you, though I know not how
But I shall bestow upon your our last kiss, on this fine hour
This hour that might help me remember
This day we first met, the first of December
I felt the pull of the kiss as your last wish came true
And I remembered it all, when it was just me and you
I felt tears of joy spill as I realize
That I broke the spell and you opened your eyes
I felt the warmth that was passed from me to you
And you looked up and smiled at me out of the blue
I felt your happiness when I told you I remember
As you asked me what day we met I said, the first of December
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Neither died, though we both saw the gate
We both came back without regret or hate
Our love is still forever strong and true
And fate made sure I was returned to you
For my wish was granted and I am eternally grateful
I am always yours and forever faithful
Let it be known that we both still remain
to take out our children to splash in puddles and dance in the rain
The End
This can be interpreted either way as I never specified which lover was the girl and the boy... so it's kinda up to you to make a descision and we'll see if you interpreted it the way it was written ( there is no right answer- merely different points of views)
Please read and review and tell me what you think!
NO FLAMES! As I said this piece is my baby- my pride and joy