
on waiting. Pretty short. Pls R*R concrit/ideas. 2nd chapter edit based on review
Rated: Fiction K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 2 - Words: 71 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 03-25-08 - id: 2494399
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My agitation shows in
my twisted contortionist hands.
They fidget fumblingly as I
cough back grumpy words,
waiting with frustrated impatience
and wishing that for once they'd
just, for Gods sake, turn up on time.
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