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Author: roseshavethorns
Fiction Rated: T - English - Mystery/Friendship - Reviews: 10 - Published: 03-31-08 - Updated: 07-20-08 - id:2497446

The next day, being Saturday, I slept until nearly eleven o’clock

The next day, being Saturday, I slept until nearly eleven o’clock. When I woke up I was for a moment confused about where I was. Then I realised I had moved. Not really wanting to get up from my insolently comfortable bed I rolled over to my side and buried my head in the pillows. Just as I was beginning to come to a decision in my pondering whether to get up or not, a knock, followed by a voice, came.

” Mr. Ackroyd would like to know if you’ll be having lunch with him?” the voice, now identified by me as Mrs. Johnson’s, asked.

” Eh,” I very intelligently replied, “ if it’s not any trouble, I would love to.”

” Oh, it’s not any trouble at all. Mr. Ackroyd will be so glad. He told me last night, he did, what a nice young man you were.”

” That’s very nice of him. When should I be down?”

” Lunch is served at one, but I’m sure Mr. Ackroyd won’t mind your company.”

” All right.” I said. “ Thank you.”

“ You’re quite welcome,” she replied and then I heard her leave.

It took me a while to get up and even longer to wash and dress so it was almost a quarter to twelve when I entered the drawing-room. Ackroyd was there, reading. He looked up when I entered.

“ Mr. Swift!” he said, cheerfully, “I trust you slept well?”

“ Yes, thank you, I did,” I said, “and I would be delighted to join you for lunch.”

“ Excellent! Please take a seat.”

I did so, in a large, puffy arm chair.

“ Eh, so…” I began hesitantly, “what are you doing?”

“ I’m reading, a report.”

“ Oh.” For someone who thought I was a nice, young man Ackroyd seemed strangely unwilling to talk. Deciding that forcing my conversation upon him wasn’t a particularly intelligent course of action if I planned on staying in his regard, I studied the room. After a while I got rather uncomfortable with the silence. I started tapping my fingers against the armrest, half unconsciously. Ackroyd looked up when hearing the sound, a frown on his face which quickly turned into a small smile when he saw what it came from. I blushed.

“ Restless, Mr Swift?” he asked, eyebrows raised.

“ A little,” I said, somewhat embarrassed. Ackroyd’s smile widened and he closed the file he was reading in and put it aside on a small table.

“ Let us talk, then “, he said. I waited, expecting him to continue, but he didn’t.

“ Very well. About what?” I asked.

“ I think I will grant you the privilege of picking a topic”, he said with a knowing smile.

“ Eh… All right. “ I hesitated; conversation wasn’t supposed to be this way. “ I guess… you could tell me more about your work.” I did of course realize this might bore him but it served him right for being so… annoying. He frowned and I grinned.

“ Very well, but don’t complain if my story bores you.”

I, of course, didn’t believe for a second that I’d be bored.

“ It won’t “, I assured him and made myself more comfortable in the chair. After a while he began his story. This one was not about a murder, but about a theft. I wont account for the details since they have no bearing on the story. Let’s just say that at the time he was finished I was far from bored. I was also hungry and thus Mrs Johnson’s arrival came very conveniently.

This became something of a routine during the following weeks. Ackroyd would tell me stories from his past and sometimes I would try to guess what conclusion he had reached. Of course, I had to attend to my work as well, which was starting to get more and more boring. I found myself looking forward to Ackroyd’s stories and the wry smiles he sometimes flashed me. He was, I realized after nearly ten weeks living in his house, my friend.


I’m sorry for the very long time it took to get this posted. I had something of a writer’s block, I guess. Short and rather uneventful chapter, I know, but necessary to establish the relationship between Ackroyd and James. James Swift, that is. Anyway, next chapter will be up pretty soon since most of it is already written.

I don’t know how noticeable it is, but English is not my native language and I apologize for any misused or simply wrong idioms or expressions. Please correct me, spelling and grammar is easy to check up but things like that are harder.

Thanks for reading and please leave a review.



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