This is a complete re-do of the first several chapters of my story A Beautiful Crisis

This is a complete re-do of the first several chapters of my story A Beautiful Crisis. I really didn’t like the way the beginning went so I decided to redo it all. The plot line of the story is completely the same, just the events that form the plot line might be altered a bit or possibly a great deal. Eventually the events will come to all of the same conclusions. I had to alter the workings of some relationships and cut some superfluous characters that really did nothing for the story. So just keep reading…and I want to know what you guys think.

Thank you all, and keep spreading to word. I need all the advice I can get.

K.C. 