Well this is not my best and it's kind of short, but tell me what you all think of it.

I’m suffocating

In my own misery

It surrounds me

Choking me as it gets tighter and tighter

A red haze in front of my eyes

I’m struggling to break free

Will I come up for air?

It pulls me – dejected - down deeper

It’s impossible to breathe

Can anyone save me now?

Sinking in the dark, cold ground

I think I’m beyond hope at this point

Does anyone understand me or what I’m feeling?

I guess I’ll never find out

You’re all too late now

I've already gone