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Author: Captain Bubbles
Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Drama - Reviews: 1 - Published: 04-15-08 - Updated: 04-15-08 - id:2504753

"Oh."
A half-reaction:
Perfectly balanced
with calm, unseeing eyes.

"Oh."
A reduction in emotion.
(Does this mean I gain a charge?)

Positive...Negative
Charge...
CHARGE.
CHARGE!

"Oh."
Oxidized.
Lost.

Pick a side.
to GAIN
or
to LOSE?

(But I have to deal with both.)
(Then balance them.)
(That's what I'm trying to do!)

"Oh."
A half-reaction:
simplified.

And the spectators just sit back and watch.

(A.N. This is chemistry related. I'm almost certain when I hit the 'save changes' button it is going to ruin the format of this poem. Can anyone tell me how to make it save the spaces I use? I tab a lot of things over and play with the space on the paper and I hate how this site uploads my poetry.)



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