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So this is a villanelle that I wrote for my college creative writing class, and I thought it was good, so I'm posting it here for all of you. It's about imagining my greatest fear (losing my hearing) and what I would feel about it if it became realistic. So drop a line when your done and let me know what you think.
There is no music anymore.
The wind is cold as the grave.
This is a state that I abhor.
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The gulls are flying above and soar,
But don’t make the sound I crave.
There is no music anymore.
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To Him, of this do I implore,
Since it is something I cannot save.
This is a state that I abhor.
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I realise I am losing more,
While feeling the spray of the crashing wave.
There is no music anymore.
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I’ve never let myself cry before,
An action my pride never forgave.
This is a state that I abhor.
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Only from memories come the sounds, I pour
Down the wasting canals into the endless cave.
There is no music anymore.
This is a state that I abhor.