Looking up into the stormy sky

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Looking up into the stormy sky

Calm sinking into the world’s veins

Slowly making all silent

Clouds race around

Like children in the midst of a field

Quick, they shout before the storm

The rain is the first sign

Then the lightning the rushing wind

All so fast like a death descending upon its prey

Trees fly away houses screech

Children muffle there cries

Somewhere in the abyss the silence thickens

Draining the life from every land

The roar of the storm screams

Hope for life slowly melting

For days it feeds

Playing hide and seek

Finding the children still sheltered deep

No one knows how long it has been

The girls whisper calming the boys

Whom rush whenever they hear another lives

The older siblings scold the younger

Trying to assume a replacing thunder

So much confusion you start to wonder

The food dwindles down to nothing

Moans of hunger from babes heard

Only the silence keeps descending

Pushing open a shelter door

Nevermore being safe in this abyss we emerge

Slowly you have to tread

Seeing nothing the babes resort back

Mama, Papa they cry in union the older look at one another

To agree they must, silent they become

Carrying one another

They walk to a new life

Calling one another with a glance they understand

The smoke and flame

And anger and blame

Never helped the former

So bending there heads

Humbly they walk

To God they pray

For clearer skies.

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