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Author: painted.music
Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Poetry - Reviews: 5 - Published: 05-04-08 - Updated: 05-04-08 - Complete - id:2513416

Don’t Let Go
11.25.07

just don’t let go, I beg
through chocolate-melted tears
I won’t, he swears,
even as his fingers slip on liquid Hershey Kisses
and then I fall
with the notes of one thousand broken promises
left ringing in my ears

I fall with a lovely, trumpet-sounding crash
climbing back up,
band-aiding up my shards of broken skin
and then I look up
how beautiful Rock Bottom looks from here

Author's note: just something I came up with a while back; I just touched it up a bit tonight and decided to post it. I don't really know where it came from but... (shrug)



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