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Like a crisp autumn leaf
She tumbles through the sky.
Driven by the wind
For she cannot fly.
So delicate, so fragile she is
Dainty, petite – raw.
For even the most perfect of things
Are sure to have their flaws.
There are so many things
That she cannot be.
Trapped in a world of her own
Broken – in all that beauty.
What use is a butterfly
Who cannot fly?
Lost. Trapped. Broken. Outcast.
...If not for that dry, shrivelled wing...
A/N - Done for school, and we were supposed to write it on one of the themes/issues/whatnot from the text we were studying. I'll leave it to you, as the reader and reviewer, to try and guess what theme it centres on. There are also a few connections between the title and the poem itself. Let's see if you can pick it out. Reviews and con-crits, please.
Edit - There seems to be something wrong with the formatting...there were supposed to be four stanzas of four lines.