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Author: Everlasting Dreamer
Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Supernatural - Reviews: 2 - Published: 05-07-08 - Updated: 05-09-08 - id:2514512

Hey guys! It’s me again (duh)… I just want to thank you all for taking time and reading this, it really means a lot to me!

Also since it’s my first fic, I’m open to all sorts of criticism, even nasty comments… so please with a huge chocolate-chip brownie review…

Also a huge thank you to my lone reviewer Jainblu, you have great comments for me and I would like to hive you a huge hug for expressing your opinions….

Also by the way if anyone got confused with the prologue and Aria having a crush on Aedan when she was thirteen and grew out of it because she was a confused thirteen year old who followed the female population and fell in love with Aedan… but then came to the realization that she was being a idiot and grew up… also now at the ripe old age of sixteen she’s not one of the most understanding, open and forgiving person she was at thirteen…

Well I hope all of the confusion is cleared up now… Also I seem to be making the mistake of calling Aria, Ania… I’m so sorry for the confusion, but her name is Aria…

What are you waiting for!

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Thoughts

After the incident at my locker, I didn’t see Aedan the whole morning… it also helped that I wasn’t in the same form class as him and didn’t have any lessons with him. Though I didn’t see him, I couldn’t help but think of him, I couldn’t concentrate in my first two classes before break and was reprimanded by all of my teachers at least twice for not paying attention in class.

It wasn’t my fault though. My mind kept on going back to when Aedan had me pinned against my locker… it wasn’t natural… I knew that he hated me, but his brother? What was his brother Caen standing looking at us, actually me for? The real question that irked me was that I had felt as if some supernatural force had aided Aedan in me not being able to move, No one could be that strong of powerful, could they?

I floated through all of my classes in a world filled with paranoia that was until my little bubble burst and I was pulled out of my reverie to go and partake in break…

I walked through the corridors, wary of any other attacks and waited outside the door of the Science lab, where Carrie had had her lesson, waiting for her to come out I began to process all of what had happened today.



I wish that I could’ve told Carrie about what had happened and how I felt, but I couldn’t… you see she would think that I was overreacting and that I shouldn’t stress over anything… If I told her the truth she would think I was such a freak, so I kept quiet.

You see, I can’t tell anyone because I have a secret… a dangerous secret, an unnatural secret, one that is a part of who and what I am…

You see, I’m a “Being”

Sorry that the chapter is so short, I promise to make it longer next time… also this chapter was a bit tedious for me, but since I have exams in a weeks time I thought that I should update when I could, so the next chapter will definitely be more interesting then this, which was basically a filler…

The next chapter will involve more inter-action with the main characters and a lot more explaining will be done…

Anyway now that I have finally said what needs to be said...

Bye-Bye… hope you keep reading and reviewing…

Everlasting Dreamer



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