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Author: tempusfugit3
Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Poetry - Published: 05-07-08 - Updated: 05-07-08 - Complete - id:2514634

Constructive Criticism

Why do they kill those,

The pointless, rapidly tearing

Apart their cryptic walls?

Causing regret repeated as torment-

-ing, meaning all and sundry.

Why do they kill these,

The present, demolishing flaws

At their colossal wills?

Neglecting the hint mistaken for shit-

-ing, but all is not sun or dry.



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