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Constructive Criticism
Why do they kill those,
The pointless, rapidly tearing
Apart their cryptic walls?
Causing regret repeated as torment-
-ing, meaning all and sundry.
Why do they kill these,
The present, demolishing flaws
At their colossal wills?
Neglecting the hint mistaken for shit-
-ing, but all is not sun or dry.