So i wrote this a while back and it really doesn't apply to my life anymore but i still feel that i could accomplish something great with some of the songs that i've written (this obviously being one of them) so i'm really glad i found this site so that i can show what i can do. So please review after you've read it. Though it seems minorly depressing... it's a more up tempo song. i just recently played it at a "Creative Writing" club that i go to on thursdays. so yeahh enjoy... i hope.

Tearing Me Apart

V1

So I thought I’d gotten over you

But I guess that wasn’t really true

I realized that last night

When I saw you holdin’ her so tight.

Pre-Ch

I’ll never know why this tears me apart

But I’ll always blame you for ripping up my heart

Ch

The way your eyes light up when she walks in the door

Or the fact she’s the girl that I know you’d do anything for

Why can’t I be the one you sit with while you’re watching the stars?

Every time I see you with her I suddenly know

You’re tearin’ me apart

You’re tearin’ me apart

V2

I know I’ll never fix this now

I’ll need you to show me how

And since you think she’s somethin’ great

I guess my heart will have to wait

Pre-Ch

I’ll never know why this tears me apart

But I’ll always blame you for ripping up my heart

Ch

The way your eyes light up when she walks in the door

Or the fact she’s the girl that I know you’d do anything for

Why can’t I be the one you sit with while you’re watching the stars?

Every time I see you with her I suddenly know

You’re tearin’ me apart

You’re tearin’ me apart

Bridge

You tell me your secrets

You tell me your dreams

You tell me everything

Yet she is the one that is holding your hand

And I just can’t understand

Ch

The way your eyes light up when she walks in the door

Or the fact she’s the girl that I know you’d do anything for

Why can’t I be the one you sit with while you’re watching the stars?

Every time I see you with her I suddenly know

The way your eyes light up when she walks in the door

Or the fact she’s the girl that I know you’d do anything for

Why can’t I be the one you sit with while you’re watching the stars?

Every time I see you with her I suddenly know

You’re tearin’ me apart

You’re tearin’ me apart

You’re tearin’ me apart

So pretty pretty please review. i would love you forever.

Thanks, love.