Author: unuttered.thoughts PM
about love and the blindness of love and plagues and such. PLEASE tell me what you think, i have an idea to maybe continue with something similar to this but if this turned out bad then i would rather not... so GOOD OR BAD?Rated: Fiction T - English - Words: 125 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 05-15-08 - Status: Complete - id: 2518021
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Ring around the roasy
Rose colored glasses
making everything look oaky
Pocket full of posies
flowers to sway my judement
my heart is plagued by love
We all fall down
on a bed that later I will regret.
A/N: I was in science when the line "ashes ashes we all fall down" got stuck in my head, and since we were only learning about biodiversity i took the time to see what i could do about it. and this is NOT based off of true happenings in my life, but what i have seen in other people's lives.
please tell me if its just crap!! or if its okay or what!! i will take any and all comments on this one :)