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Missing You
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A poem I wrote a little while ago and finally got around to revising. It's sad and sweet.
Rated: Fiction K+ - English - Drama - Words: 109 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 2 - Published: 05-30-08 - id: 2524661
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Missing You

I dreamt of dark, crisp skies
Softest, sweetest lullabies
And thought of you

I heard your favorite song
Laughed at how you'd carry on
Humming with you

I jumped in piled leaves
A childhood of "dropping eaves"
And laughed for you

I found our old hideout
Our hearts turning inside-out
Still loving you

I walked through pouring rain
Whispering that does not change
And cried for you

I read an old, worn book
Meanings earlier mistook
Now knowing you


This poem has a set rhyme scheme and number of syllables per line for each stanza. Constructive criticism is highly welcome, as are all other reviews.

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